Broken Angel (Unfinished)

18 February 2010

This poem, about the same friend as Fallen Star and What I Give, is also an abstract poem. Not so much literally about her as about people like her.

She’s a broken angel

With a doubly broken heart

Her wings, she clipped herself

Not wanting to play the part


She’s a broken angel

She’s a fallen star


One Response to “Broken Angel (Unfinished)”

  1. This one is really a grand visual. I definitely can’t wait to read the rest, so get those creative juices flowing and get those fingers moving! LOL, Really though, it has a very natural flow and it’s really easy to grasp. WRITE ON!

    ~ Heather Paye

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