Liza

20 February 2010

Little monsters on the screen

Intelligently study me

Zooming through the forest and tree

A friend I love to see

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One Response to “Liza”

  1. This is an adorable little acrostic poem! I didn’t notice any errors. I think it’s absolutely wonderful! My favorite line is definitely the first one, it’s a great capture for your readers. WRITE ON!

    ~ Heather Paye

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