Hidden Sorrow

19 June 2010

Even though she refuses to cry

The tears come, ubidden

Though she will never show it

The pain, it lies there, hidden

Maybe one day she won’t have to worry

Then she won’t into that dark corner scurry.

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4 Responses to “Hidden Sorrow”

  1. anon said

    unbidden?

  2. This is a very well written poem. I like how each stanza is different, but the rhymes pull it together overall. I found the last line a bit awkward, but that’s all I found wrong with it. Great job!

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