Hidden Sorrow
19 June 2010
Even though she refuses to cry
The tears come, ubidden
Though she will never show it
The pain, it lies there, hidden
Maybe one day she won’t have to worry
Then she won’t into that dark corner scurry.
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It's Never Just Words 
unbidden?
Without being summoned/asked for. She doesn’t want to cry, but she does anyway
just asking if that’s what the typo was supposed to be
This is a very well written poem. I like how each stanza is different, but the rhymes pull it together overall. I found the last line a bit awkward, but that’s all I found wrong with it. Great job!