Free Myself With You

27 July 2010

I just drown in you

Your scent, your feel

The presence of your body

It’s just this feels real

Like maybe I don’t have to hide

Maybe I don’t have to pretend

I’d love to free myself with you

To make the pain end

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3 Responses to “Free Myself With You”

  1. Line four seems a bit awkward, but that’s all I noticed. You write the awesome-est love poems. WRITE ON!

    ~ Heather Paye

  2. Hannah Ruby said

    you know what?
    after reading alot fo your stuff you could probably write really good romance novels pacted full of sex and hardcore romance and you’d still make it tasteful

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